Book 2: An invitation for feedback.


    Hello, dear friends.


    The epilogue for book two has gone up. Now that I''m going into the whole-book editing phase, I wanted to ask if you had any constructive feedback for me. I have a lot of things that I want to sharpen and improve, but as the author, I can be blind to issues.


    PS. Please be kind to each other in the comments. Everyone likes different things, and that''s okay. If you agree with what someone says, give the comment a like or something so I can better gauge its weight.


    I love you.


    The poll with all of your wonderful suggestions for book 3''s first animal pal will be going up tomorrow; I want to give a little more time for people to comment.